2012/06/28

Travels With Beatrix


The black ink lines are razor-sharp, thick, thin, with subtle turns, details illustrating a story. The gallery in Hawkshead displayed the stunning, original art inspired by the landscape outside. Rabbits, ducks, mice . . . add soft watercolors and an enchanted world appears for children to get lost in.
The young in heart can get lost in Beatrix’s vision for that landscape, too. The character of Peter Rabbit enabled the talented artist to tell a story to last for generations—the story found in the Lake District in England.
A mere traveler through the Lake District last month, I was overwhelmed with the achievement of an unmarried woman at the turn of twentieth century, armed with pen and ink, using art and children’s story to set aside the landscape and the fell farming way of life. Beatrix Potter bought farms surrounding her beloved country home and donated over 4,000 acres to the National Trust. Today the Lake District National Park preserves the country life she honored and the beauty of land huddled around mirrored lakes, velvet green hills, howes after fells. Stone walls wandering onward, gentle brooks still flowing, and the baaing of sheep grazing on . . . I looked for bunnies and saw a new family of ducks floating by. I heard the quiet and felt the soul of Beatrix.
My late spring odyssey will be with me always.

2012/04/26

Poetry Surprise


One reason to study poetry is to enrich all of your writing. This year, I’m attending a couple of poetry workshops in order to learn about structure. The first workshop used Structure & Surprise: Engaging Poetic Turns, edited by Michael Theune. My practice poems are pushing me toward considering turns and surprises thoughtfully. Both concepts important in writing prose stories as well. My piles of poetry rejection letters show a new view is needed. I’m looking outward and finding surprise in my poetry and prose stories. Now, on to the next workshop with more confidence . . . writing is an on-going journey.


Early version:

PAPER VERSE
by Linnea Heaney

Blank years, tossed into
lost corners, forgotten,
scattered words, wasted
seconds to be rushed out,
paper verse, wads crushed—
only my spilling thoughts left.


Revised version:

PAPER VERSES
by Linnea Heaney

Blank thoughts
thrown, crumpled, toward waste basket
while seconds ticked on—now,
view transformed as paper verses flow
out, dashing words down,
spilling laughter, memories about.


STRUCTURE & SURPRISE: ENGAGING POETIC TURNS, edited by Michael Theune (Teachers & Writers Collaborative, 2007).